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Malay Level 3

In Uncategorized on Februari 2, 2009 at 3:14 pm

Pada tahun ini, saya tidak meracangkan meracang menjadi pelajar Bahasa Melayu. Kerananya Kerana itu, saya berasa gembira semasa saya jelas belajar Bahasa Melayu Pendahuluan Kuliah. Semasa Cikgu memberitahu semua pelajar akan belajar pantun, saya berasa terengah kerana di dalam rancangan televisyen “The Little Nonya” ada banyak pantun. Saya memandang tidak sabar sabar terhadap mencipta pantun saya.

Saya sudah mencipta tiga pantun. Ciptaan pantun sangat seronok. Saya belajar banyak pegatahuan untuk menulis pantun baik ketika kuliah dahulu.

Cikgu dan kawan-kawan, sila yukai pantun saya dan kalau salah tolong tunjukkan. Terima Kasih.

1)
Badan penari bagai diraut,
Berjoget lembut waktu siang;
Seorang diri di tepi laut,
Hati tenang rasa riang.

2)
Bunga berkembang cantik berseri,
Burung terbang dipipiskan lada;
Duduk di sini berfikir sendiri,
Kenapa kami tidak boleh bersama?

3)
Hutang emas dalam keluarga,
Bersama kita semasa mewah;
Persahabatn kami berapa harga?
Bagai padi dengan kerbau di sawah.

Note to self: I had a great time creating these pantuns. Especially the second one. During lecture last week, Cikgu went through with us on how to make a sentence more poetic. It was really interesting to see how a simple sentence can have so many variations, with each variation implying a different meaning.

  1. Dear Xin Yun

    It’s fun already reading the sentences as I can’t stop to point out these (yet to read the pantun):

    1. Typo

    merancang

    2. Structure

    Kerananya > Kerana itu

    …Pendahuluan > Kuliah (lecture) Pendahuluan

    what is terengah ? could it be tercegat (petrified) ?

    3, Meaning

    memandang is to look at

    I know you mean look forward to

    it should then be: tidak sabar-sabar (cannot wait any longer)

    Why does it feel like 2201’s blogging ritual again?????
    😛 cikgu

  2. Ok I finally have the courage to read the pantuns

    The first and second are good and we had been through the marination process.

    The third is funny because

    1. The two lines in the symbolic statement are not flowing as the material debt is occuring during wealthy times. If it was wealthy then there should be no debt as you afford the splurge!

    2. In the message: asking the price of friendship is way to direct… [So unMalay] and shocking.

    3. As if asking directly wasn’t you invoke an ox in the paddy field which are:

    3a lengthy
    3b. how is friendship related with ox and farming
    3c. Obviously the pantun maker was concern with the b-b rhyming and sacrifices the meaning aesthetics as well as the cultural appropriateness.

    Overall this is a nice attempt which should be revisited from time to time…

    terima kasih
    cikgu😛

  3. YOOO Hoooo

    Nothing to see

    Don’t forget to reply to my pantun😛

    cikgu

  4. meracang > n is missing

    terengah has to do with physical (fatigue etc.)

    gembira, suka hati, riang etc.

    terhadap > untuk

    pengetahuan is spelled wrongly

    yukai > menyukai

    Cikgu
    [why does it feel like level 2]

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